Last week I finished editing a short documentary profiling the Sustainability Fair the Davis Food Co-op held back in July. I could spend ages tidying it up and making it perfect, but I don’t really have time.
If you’re interested in reading my self-criticism, after the jump are some of the bits I’d spend time fixing in an ideal world in which days last 48 hours, I work for eight hours a day and need to sleep for only seven.
- I’m not satisfied with my timing of the cuts in the opening sequence. I cut rigidly on the beat every time, which is stupid. That won’t happen again.
- I haven’t colour corrected anything, which I would do in a fiction movie, or in fact anything more artsy than a news report.
- I haven’t done a thorough enough sound edit. I find sound editing really tedious. Again, I’d spend the time on it if I were making a fiction film – or if I had the budget I’d pay someone else to fix the sound!
- Some of the text bits don’t align quite perfectly.
- I wish I’d shot more b-roll, but considering Shaw and I shot all this in about two hours, and I had to be somewhere else directly afterwards we did fairly well.
Did you spot any of these problems? Of course, there are things which I’m quite pleased with. I might even describe them as “slick,” but I’m not going to improve as a movie maker by patting myself on the back.
21/09/2007
And did anyone spot me climbing onto the pink moped during those quick opening shots? The moped was electric. And awesome. I want it.
21/09/2007
Whooops. Once again I left a comment accidentally as Liam. That was ME on the moped. Obviously. Liam doesn’t wear green tank tops.
21/09/2007
Good work, Liam! Want more, want more!
22/09/2007
I like it when Liam wears green tank tops.
24/09/2007
4:3? 4:3? It’s positively paleolithic!